Friday, July 20, 2007

Reading In The Rain

Droplets of rain,
Edit your letter.

"Dearest, long, touch,
tears, pain, alone,
missing, forever, love"

I salvage your message,
From a blotted canvas.

12 comments:

Niranjan said...

Neat, with a mental blur that clarifies in course :-)

aabeirah said...

Soft and beautiful...

Shreemoyee said...

Very nice. Made my moment right now :)

Pallavi said...

so nicely written! what rains cudnt do...

RTD2 said...

Lovely!

Nocturne said...

of course she cried.

frissko said...

you can never salvage it fully i guess...beautiful one...

Parth said...

@All: Thanks.

Sparsh said...

The rain does write beautifully:)

kaunquest said...

romantic! nice one buddy!

mystic rose said...

sadly touching. and lovely.

Parth said...

@Sparsh, Kaunquest, mystic rose: Thanks :-)