Friday, May 01, 2009

And Then There Was Light

Rays of light
Break through the cloud.
Rummaging the earth
Like words scrambling,
In search of a metaphor.

7 comments:

Ankit said...

That is a very interesting... what shall I say... anti-metaphor :). I'm always fascinated when the point of view of a certain situation is turned on its head- leads to amusing images :)

neel said...

hope the words find the metaphor.... it has done so far... and how! :)

Parth said...

@Ankit, Neel: Thanks for checking in and sharing your thoughts. Another post is due and how and hopefully it shall come soon.

mystic rose said...

lovely.

Parth said...

@Mystic Rose: Thanks.

shreya said...

i love this, i love this, i love this! :)

Parth said...

@Shreya: Thank you, thank you, thank you :)