Go yonder starlight;
Infinity beckons.
Let mortals remain
Forever trapped
Between gravity and grave
Go yonder starlight;
Don’t pierce the blue sky.
Let us earn first
Our light, Our shadows
Our air, Our breaths
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An attempt to capture the essence of my thoughts and put them in bearable prose, or worse (as the unimaginative pun indicates). Not too different from my scribbles on paper, only a lot more legible.
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Maybe some of need this ray of light to wake up to the reality of life?
It feels incomplete to me; perhaps another verse?
@Vidya: I suppose when I was writing this, I was in no mood to give a redemptive chance or a helping hand. I find the poem complete in the way I intended it to be.
lovely.
not the cynicism, but the way you expressed it. so inspiredly.
@Mystic Rose: Thanks!
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