Monday, March 11, 2013

My son, the story-teller

I have a guest writer on my blog today. My four year old Aarush entered into a creative writing contest as his school. The following story came out as a result of it. It was 'dictated' to me by him since he cannot yet write. However, the title is his, the story idea is his and all the words are his as well. With a little bit of guidance from me and my wife, he was able to come up with this little tale. My only pre-condition for him was that the story should have a premise, a problem, a solution and a moral or lesson. He followed that structure (though he did seem a tad unconvinced by the ending, and you'll see why :))

As a father, I couldn't have been prouder to see the creative gene show some signs of emergence. And oh, purely incidental to this experience, he won the contest :)

 

The Boy And His Robot

by Aarush Pandya

There was a boy whose parents asked him to help around the house. He did not want to do the work himself. He built a robot to make his life easier. When the boy presses a button on the robot, the robot does the job that the picture on the button shows. For eg. If he presses the button that has a picture of toys, a sucker that is on the side of the robot sucks up all the toys and arranges them. But one time, the boy presses a button and the robot goes out of control. He makes all the things messy that he had made perfect. There is a special switch that the boy has to turn off to switch off the robot. The boy learned the lesson that he should not build another robot. He should do the work all by himself.

7 comments:

Niranjan said...

The story is absolutely charming! Time sure does fly - I had no idea Aarush was 4 years old, or old enough to write a story. Or it may be that he is just plain precocious, which is not surprising :). Must feel great!

Parth said...

@Niranjan: Thanks so much. I am glad you enjoyed it. Technically, he didn't write it because he can't still write :) However, he dictated it to me and I typed it out. He in fact went ahead and illustrated it page by page. I well and truly acted as a dumb scribe and wrote down whatever he said. Precocious or not, I am just happy that he find joy in this. Talent is no good without interest.

sd said...

Very nice and very sweet! The story reminds me of a certain Mr. Asimov....

- Santanu

Parth said...

@Santanu: Long time, no hear. Does it take a story from my son to bring you out of hibernation? :) Just kidding. Glad you liked the story. Do keep stopping by.

shreya said...

Hahahaha! That's adorable! I want to get into kids' heads, sometimes. It must be so much more interesting up there...

Parth said...

@Shreya: Good to hear from you after such a long time. Yes, indeed, the mind of a child works in such unexpected ways.

Sukanya C said...

I am curious to know how the story would have ended if you hadn't forced your structure on your son?!!!! Ask him ... and share the new ending with us!