It has been a long time since my only attempt at haiku on this blog. I remember a suggestion made to add titles to the haikus, but I think it takes away from the impact of the poem. I should also add that I tried to be true to the 5-7-5 syllable format of the haiku, but couldn't completely adhere. There also seems to be no consensus on whether syllables in English correspond to the sounds in Japanese on which the haikus are based, so I will use that as my leeway. Here goes. Hope you enjoy them.
Wind screams
In shrill whispers
A cracked window
Mind awakens
After the body
Hot coffee
I swing.
I miss. I sigh.
A dot ball
The journey ends
No parting sorrow
“My floor”
Blinds closed
I pull the plug
On the sun
Wednesday, August 29, 2007
Tuesday, August 14, 2007
Garage Sale
The mother puts on a bellicose facade
Forcing her son into silence, who frowns;
At the loss of all things precious
Superman’s first adventures, torn
A bicycle too small,
A shirt too tight,
A dancing monkey,
His first tennis racket,
A poster of Agassi, with flowing hair.
Fifteen years of accumulation valued
At sixty dollars and twenty square feet
Forcing her son into silence, who frowns;
At the loss of all things precious
Superman’s first adventures, torn
A bicycle too small,
A shirt too tight,
A dancing monkey,
His first tennis racket,
A poster of Agassi, with flowing hair.
Fifteen years of accumulation valued
At sixty dollars and twenty square feet
Saturday, August 04, 2007
Three Down, Some More To Go
Three's a charm, a lucky charm
Three's the number of years this blog exists
(sung to the tune of some part of Do Re Mi from Sound of Music)
It has been a fun ride. Thanks for the company.
Three's the number of years this blog exists
(sung to the tune of some part of Do Re Mi from Sound of Music)
It has been a fun ride. Thanks for the company.
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